Guest Posted November 23, 2011 Posted November 23, 2011 My son is in the process of writing his personal statement to apply for uni next year. He has completed it and had it checked, but he just needs to tweek the following statement: "Another attribute I believe to have shown is dedication and commitment; this is because I had to commute about an hour to and from college each day" he needs to find a stronger reason for his dedication and commitment. Any ideas?? He is studying AAT level 3 at college (association of accounting technicians). Quote
AnonyMouse_35605 Posted November 23, 2011 Posted November 23, 2011 Weekend job? Duke of Edinburgh? Animals? Volunteering? It is incredibly hard for them. I have one doing it for uni and one for 6th form at the same time. Quote
Guest Posted November 23, 2011 Posted November 23, 2011 Thanks, He has already included his work. Just need why he is dedicated to his college course. Quote
AnonyMouse_8282 Posted November 23, 2011 Posted November 23, 2011 Thanks, He has already included his work. Just need why he is dedicated to his college course. High attendance rate,always on time- depsite long travelling time?, assignments always in on time? Anything extra he did at college- groups,clubs etc? Quote
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